The writing you've shown me so far lacks emotional punch.
I have a feeling you have intentionally tried to avod that.
avoided it deliberately?
Emotional punch is what gets through to people. If you have been aiming
for logic without passion, that is not likely to be very effective.
Dr Richard Stallman
President, Free Software Foundation
51 Franklin St
Boston MA 02110
Skype: No way! That's nonfree (freedom-denying) software.
Use free telephony http://directory.fsf.org/category/tel/